Tuesday, June 24, 2014

EPIC ...from One Diamond to Three Diamonds...

The ‘Character 1’ is now the main idea (BLACK) . Characteristic 1 (in BLUE) and Characteristic 2 (RED) are the controlling Ideas

FIRST Sentence-A sentence with the main idea (BLACK)  and,two controlling ideas. (ONE BLUE AND ONE RED) Gives the reader the feeling of “Afterwards the paragraph will be about this)

SECOND ,THIRD AND FOURTH sentences-Supporting details for first controlling idea (all in BLUE)

FIFTH, SIXTH and SEVENTH sentences –Supporting details for second controlling idea (all in RED)

EIGHT sentence-last sentence (in BLACK) –the concluding sentence. Gives the audience the feeling of “can you recall, the paragraph was about this?”

NOTE: DO this for all the Developmental Paragraphs

3 DIAMONDS…

The first prominent character is Mary Katherine who is determined and rebellious. She is determined to save the pod as Queen Tara orders her to do the important duty. Her determination makes her a likeable character. . Mary Katherine refuses to live with her father because she is annoyed with his behaviour. Being rebellious is also a part of a teenager’s life and Mary Katherine’s character clearly shows that. . Therefore, Mary Katherine is both determined and rebellious.


The second character in the movie is Mandrake, who is an evil but at the same time a caring creature. The  evil part of Mandrake is shown when he destroys half of the forest and wants the forest to be ruled by him Mandrake is a character the audience will love to hate and that makes him memorable. Beside evil, Mandrake also have a good character which is he is very caring about his son. This is obviously show when he decides to take revenge because of the death of his son.In short,  Mandrake is evil and also a caring creature .



The third prominent character is Queen Tara who is humble and brave. She is a queen and has  magical powers. Although she can control all the plants in the forest, she is humble and down to earth. She  is very friendly with her people and does not care about her position.  Eventhough she is protected safely by her soldiers when Mandrake and his clan attack, she  rescued herself bravely.. These shows that Queen Tara is humble and brave.

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