Thursday, September 18, 2014

Preparing for Final Exam: Argumentative Essay (Sample 1)

Argumentative Essays??????
There are many ways to write an argumentative essay. Here’s  yet another way…
Topic?
More often than not, students do not have any say in the choice of topics; however, if there REALLY is a choice to make….choose a topic that you have lots to say NOT something that you (1) like, or (2) a topic that you think you know but have not given much thought about.
Taking Sides?
Although you need to have a stand , you also need to know that you need to consider both sides of the argument to the reader. (its like “appearing to agree with your opponent , but you end up making the opponent’s point less significant than your stand!)

Evidence?
During exams, when you do not have the luxury of articles to read before deciding on the points to write, try to take evidence that is Not:
(a)  Personal
(b)  Religious based
(c)  Over-generalized (not everyone is like that ALL the time!)

Remember, every main idea that you decide to write must be supported by details and evidence that are true for all, valid and not biased.

Sample Essay by Students
Sample 1



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Thesis Statement:
Many will agree television provides safety to the users; however, internet is favoured more because it is multi-function and is more convenient.
Point 1: Monitor (Against)
Supporting Details: (1) Monitor
a.       Malaysian government label programmes
b.      Filter/censor
                        (2) Victims of cyber crime
                                    a.  no reported cases of people hacking tv
                                    b. viewers feel safe
Point 2: Many Functions (For)
(1)  Information
a.    Real time
b.    faster
(2)  Social networking
a.    Interaction
b.    everywhere
Point 3: Convenient(For)
(1)  portable
a.    from many devices
b.    change devices
(2)  easily accessible
a.    no cables
b.    better viewing quality
Conclusion:
Hence, internet is more popular than the television. It is more convenient and can serve many functions compared to the traditional television. Although television stations have made it safe for viewing according to the viewers’ age group, many turn to internet for more freedom of choice. Television is still considered useful to the society for source of information and entertainment. However, when it comes to getting quick, up-to-date news and  views, the internet remains the society’s top choice.


Nowadays, society depends on the internet for many occasions. This scenario has made watching  television a thing of the past. Television stations are constantly making interesting changes to attract people to watch television like they used to. Do people still watch television? Is the internet taking over the entertainment functions of television? Many will agree television provides safety to the users; however,internet is favoured more because it is multi-function and is more convenient.
Firstly, television programmes are safe; parents can monitor what their children watch, and television viewers are free from being victims of cyber-crimes. The Malaysian government has made it compulsory for each programme to be labelled. This kind of filtering helps parents monitor what their under aged children can or cannot watch.Besides that, there have been no reported cases of hacking in television which can jeopardize the safety of the viewers. Viewers are free to watch their programmes at any time they feel convenient, without worrying if anyone will hack the programme. So, television viewing is considered safer compared to the internet.
Television viewing may be safe and well protected by adults so that under-aged children are not exposed to danger. However, this safety capability is the very reason why adults, teenagers, and children turn to the internet. Internet provides more freedom than the television can offer.
One of the reasons why internet is more popular than television is it can serve many functions. Internet can provide up-to-date information as well as enable social networking to take place. From the internet, news and information obtained real-time; faster than the news portrayed in newspapers and even television. Moreover, internet not only provides news, it allows interaction to take place, from various parts of the world. Social networking medium like skype, twitter, watsapp, facebook and many more have brought people together. So, internet may prove more popular for various reasons.
Besides being multi-functional, internet is also popular because it is convenient; it is portable and easily accessible. Compared to the television, users can log in to internet from many types of devices such as the laptop, the tab, and also hand phones. Users of internet can easily change or add on devices for better internet coverage. Besides, the use of television may require tv antenna or cabletv for better viewing. Internet users need only to surf other websites to get better viewing quality. Thus, internet is more suited to fit the busy and on-the-go lifestyle of today’s society.
Hence, internet is more popular than the television. It is more convenient and can serve many functions compared to the traditional television. Although television stations have made it safe for viewing according to the viewers’ age group, many turn to internet for more freedom of choice. Television is still considered useful to the society for source of information and entertainment. However, when it comes to getting quick, up-to-date news and  views, the internet remains the society’s top choice.
Prepared by
Ammar Nizamuddin
Muhammad Zulfikri
Megat Ritzhan
Abdul Qahar
Muhammad IkmalFirdaus
Muaz