The ‘Character 1’ is now the main idea (BLACK) . Characteristic 1 (in
BLUE) and Characteristic 2 (RED) are the controlling Ideas
FIRST Sentence-A sentence with the main idea (BLACK) and,two controlling ideas. (ONE BLUE AND ONE
RED) Gives the reader the feeling of “Afterwards the paragraph will be about
this)
SECOND ,THIRD AND FOURTH sentences-Supporting details for first
controlling idea (all in BLUE)
FIFTH, SIXTH and SEVENTH sentences –Supporting details for second
controlling idea (all in RED)
EIGHT sentence-last sentence (in BLACK) –the concluding sentence. Gives
the audience the feeling of “can you recall, the paragraph was about this?”
NOTE: DO this for all the Developmental Paragraphs
3 DIAMONDS…
The
first prominent character is Mary Katherine who is determined and rebellious. She is determined to save the pod as Queen Tara orders her
to do the important duty. Her determination makes her a likeable character. .
Mary Katherine refuses to live with her father
because she is annoyed with his behaviour. Being
rebellious is also a part of a teenager’s life
and Mary Katherine’s character clearly shows that. . Therefore, Mary Katherine is both determined and
rebellious.
The
second character in the movie is Mandrake, who is an evil
but at the same time a caring creature. The evil part of Mandrake is shown when he
destroys half of the forest and wants the forest to be
ruled by him Mandrake is a character the audience will love to hate and that
makes him memorable. Beside evil, Mandrake also have a good character which is he
is very caring about his son. This is obviously show when he decides to take
revenge because of the death of his son.In short, Mandrake
is evil and also a caring
creature .
The
third prominent character is Queen Tara who is humble and brave. She is a queen and has magical powers. Although she can control all
the plants in the forest, she is humble and down to earth. She is very friendly with her people and does not
care about her position. Eventhough she
is protected safely by her soldiers when Mandrake and his clan attack, she rescued herself bravely.. These shows that Queen
Tara is humble and brave.
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