Wednesday, July 9, 2014

Some ideas for Oral Commentary of a Movie Assignment SAMPLE OF STUDENT ESSAY -4-(Movie:In Time-) -The Mind Map and Essay


THE ESSAY

IS RAYMOND REALLY THE VILLAIN N IN ‘’IN TIME’’?

Villains in movies are sometimes portrayed as bad and violent. In movies, sometimes, good characters pretend to be bad or may end up as bad characters and sometime villains may end up as good. Raymond is portrayed as a villain in "In Time", however, a close analysis of his characters reveals both the evil and good side of Raymond. Raymond  has two bad characteristic such as  cruel and selfish but he also has a good character such as he is responsible. The characters that Raymond portrays shows even the bad person has some negative attitude but that person can also have the positive attitudes in their lives.
Raymond is a cruel person, and this is seen in the way he handles his  job and how he behaves a s a thief. Raymond is a cruel person because he kills Henry Hamilton’s when Henry Hamilton was sleeping. Besides that, Raymond is also a thief of time. He want to live longer and become a rich man from stealing the other person’s time. So, In Time movie, Raymond shows that he is a cruel person in different ways like he is a killer and in the same time, he is also a thief.
Raymond is a selfish person when it comes to  time and power. Raymond is selfish because he steals Sylvia’s time when her car is involved in an accident and he does not want to share the time with his friends. Raymond is also selfish through the use of his  power. He used the power for his own uses for example he uses the title as a “ time keeper “ to add on to his power. So, Raymond is selfish actor in ‘In Time’ movie and he shows the attitude in different ways.
On the other hand, Raymond has the good attitude that is he responsible towards his job and time. Raymond is responsible with his job because he is so addicted in his work. He has to be a good  ‘time keeper’ and he is also alert when  anyone makes mistakes like stealing other people's time.He will catch the thief . In addition to that, Raymond is also responsible in his time. He defines that time is very important because he manages his time properly to satisfy he needs like adding the extra time to live longer. Even though Raymond is seen as the villain character, he has the some good qualities that we can model from.

In a nut shell , this movie shows both sides of Raymond.. From this movie, i learn that there are many sides of a person. Sometimes, some bad characters we meet have reasons why they become so. Some good characters were once bad. Not everyone is as bad as we think they are, and not all good people were good last time too.