Wednesday, July 9, 2014

Some ideas for Oral Commentary of a Movie Assignment-SAMPLE OF STUDENT ESSAY-3 (Movie: Breaking Dawn) -The Mind Map and Essay

THE ESSAY

IS JACOB REALLY THE VILLAIN IN ‘BREAKING DAWN?’

The movie ‘Breaking Dawn’ is a very unique movie that contain action and romance. The movie is from novel adaptation which is written by famous writer, Stephanie Meyer. This movie has an interesting plot because it tells about the life of a group of vampires and werewolves. One of the best characters is Jacob Black. He is one of the Black Pack members. But is Jacob really the villain in Breaking Dawn?  Jacob may have betrayed his pack but he has shown heroic characteristics by his sacrifice and responsible act.
            Jacob betrayal  towards his clan make us see him as the villain in this movie; yet his compassionate behavior is  not villain-quality. But there is a reason for him doing so. Jacob was protecting Bella from his own clan who tried to kill her. He made the members of his clan angry when he took Bella’s side. He is not doing it just for love, he also understands Bella’s choice to have her baby. Initially, he agreed to kill the baby for his clan, but he could not do it when he saw the baby. Jacob’s shows his compassion  by caring for Bella and betrayed his clan in the process.
            Jacob’s  sacrifice is not only shown when he  quit his clan and  gave up his love for Bella to Edward. When his clan insisted that Bella and her baby were to be killed. The clan was convinced that Bella’s baby will a monster and endanger Jacob’s clan. Jacob disagreed with them and he therefore quit his clan. Jacob’s never ending love for Bella made him do anything for her. He not only took care of Bella and protect her from his clan, he even helped Edward to take care of Bella when Bella needed help. Jacob sacrifice his family and love –and that is not villain characteristic.
            Jacob showed his responsible character by taking care of Bella and helping the Cullen’s family. Jacob cared for Bella the moment he knew Bella’s health was deteriorating due to the pregnancy. He chose to take care of Bella even though Bella was already married to Edward.Jacob also helped the Cullen family to protect Bella from danger. He ignored his hatred for the vampires and went all out to help the Cullen family. Thus, Jacob joined the responsibility of saving Bella from danger as well as helping the Cullen family.

            So, is Jacob really a villain in ‘Breaking Dawn?’ His betrayal towards his clan so he could sacrifice for Bella, and take responsibility over her health. Jacob also felt he was responsible to protect the Cullen’s family from his clan. Jacob was seen as a villain because he was Edward’s rival to win Bella’s heart initially. But when he lost Bella to Edward, his undying love for Bella was seen by the way he cared for her. Just because Edward is the hero in the movie, that does not make Jacob a villain.